Lethal Disfunction: Deep Rock Galactic Lets Play - (Part 2)
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Following up their promotions, Chase, Joe and Zack get a little big headed and decide to take on the lethal difficulty. The ice is cold and the glyphids relentless. They will need to work together in order to survive this gameplay. But that's not really their style now is it?
Total rating= 13
really good, no real critiques
I would love to see you guys play rust together. i just get this feeling that itll be really funny and make a good video
Nice intro, very catchy :D I liked the text animations, very different what I have used to see on videos. The video was a little bit chaotic for viewers like me who have not played this game. Maybe some structure on the video would keep it on rails. I would say that your videos are actually quality stuff for your target audience which I think is players who have played that specific game. If the commentary is more like: "Oh, what the heck is this monster.." then it's more general and people who have not played the game, can learn the dynamics of the game with you. In this video, the person outside of the target audience is a little bit confused about what is happening. Just a thought of mine, if you happen to not be sure who your target audience is. If you want to grow your audience faster I would recommend doing maybe every 1 to 5 or 1 to 4 more general video which can hook new viewers outside of the boundaries. Now, I don't know your strategy but that came just my mind. Great work with video!
I feel like the text for your captions could be a little bigger and bolder so it’s easier to read and stands out more. The use of captions is good though.
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