Trying To Defuse The Darkenss Inside | The Last Of Us 2 - Part 3

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Published on 08/12/20

Hello all, welcome back to the part 3 of The Last Of Us Part 2, had to take a bit of a break for multiple reasons, but we are soldiering on in this epic crazy journey that is part 2. In this episode we deal with a lot of feel of the fresh and intense hurt Ellie has sustained from the last episode. We are going through Joel's house and the feels are here for sure. As well as taking a journey with Dina to take our revenge but not without seeing some beauty along the way.

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Ok, so I like that you have a branded intro, I also like the use of a clip at the front of your video. The end screen was good too. So many people don't bother to put in an end screen and it's so easy to do. I also like the way you closed out the video and good with the audience interaction overall. A couple of things to work on: As you said it was a bit slow, I feel like there may have been more you could have cut out because of this. Another thing was your cough. Get yourself some water or something, make sure you're properly lubricated before recording and if it does still happen try to edit that out. It's a little grating to hear all the time. Good video overall, just a bit long, but the audio was quality and well balanced.

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I liked your intro and you spoke very naturally. One thing I didn't like was when you stopped to brick wall while the first cut scene. Now, someone might lost interest at this point, at least if they have seen the cut scene earlier. If you have strong reactions to the story and you want to keep your play through it story-based I would keep the cut scenes but otherwise, I just would cut them off. I mean the video is really long and I had to really like your personality that I could watch the whole thing (not saying that there is anything bad with your personality), but I tend to like shorter and trimmed gameplay videos where all unnecessary parts are cropped away. Btw you could work as a broadcast journalist, that good your voice is!

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