Really nice thumbnail, I liked it a lot. The commentary was a little jumbled and quiet, so it was hard to hear. I would turn that up a bit and maybe also add subtitles. You were missing an introduction which would help us understand which voices people are in this scenario. The end screen was good tho and so was the rest of the video.
It was quite at times, it’s confusing who’s talking sometimes. Other than that, ok video.
Nice thumbnail! The video was good, and there were some pretty amusing moments throughout. What I would recommend though is increasing the volume of the people in the video as sometimes they're quite quiet, making the video faster paced, and maybe adding some subtitles with different colors representing the players. It could've done with an introduction to help us understand the context of the video, but other than that, it was well made. Good job!
The off center screen is just stressful to watch, along with that the clips are a bit hard to keep track of since it’s just random conversation
Woof so I'm going to be a little harsh. Not trying to be mean just for the sake of being mean. This is my honest first impression:
-I don't know why I just hate hearing bro-giggling and that's how the video started.
-Lots of bro-giggling throughout the video.
-Feeling very bored at 90 second mark
-Quit watching at 2:10. Seems this video is no more than people saying ohh, ahh, and other noises of amusement with an occasional "BRO!" and some swearing. Not witty or insightful at all, and most importantly, very boring and not unique.
Also felt the thumbnail was a bit misleading. Didn't see Tiger Woods once. I thought this would literally be golfing without clubs and didn't realize it was a gaming video.
Anyways, I hope I'm not being too mean. I'm 33 and don't game at all, so I'm far from your target audience. If your audience retention numbers are good, don't even listen to my critiques. Best of luck
I think the thumbnail is awesome but it could use some work. I really like it and its pretty funny but the audio is distracting. I would suggest you improve your commentary.
Hey some tips
Work on audio, some people are too quiet then it suddenly peaks. Audio can be mixed better or just tweak your mic settings.
You aren't adding much to the video. Maybe talk more about what's happening right now it is just sounds. If you want to stick to this type of reactionary stuff then maybe add a facecam.
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