The way I was recording was messed up but i still had fun making it :)
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I like the content! All you guys shouting at each other for 10 mins straight is definitely fun to watch, though I don't understand how Twitch messed it up so that it was zoomed in, I've never seen that before, but that's besides the point, not in your control now is it. I would recommend trying to think of a more catchy title though, as sure it'll grab views from current subs, but new viewers might not click with such a simple title. The video itself was good, the editing was simple but I think that works best with this 'Funny Moments' style of video, so good job! Hopefully if you make another of these and upload it here, we'll be able to see the whole video, and that'll likely increase entertainment throughout for your viewers!
Maybe turn down those affects, way too loud
Maybe lower your friends sound too
Some of these clips are dull, maybe have only the really interesting clips
Dulls not the word, just lacking of craziness or of something to keep the viewer engaged
This video is in dire need of some things, the audio levels need to be adjusted, the clips need to be more engaging. It’s in dire need of background music and the occasional sound effect or subtitle that emphasizes a reaction or strange sentence. Other than that, not the worst. Even with the bad recording.
The Intro is pretty nice, and you guys bickering is pretty fun to listen to. However there's a few things. I don't know how your recording got zoomed in but along with mentioning it in the description like you did, I would also throw some text up on the screen at the beginning to make sure the viewer sees it and realizes it's not normal for your content. Only one of you have a clear mic, another one is too close and keeps popping and another is either too far or to poor quality of a mic. You could also use some kind of audio. There wasn't any game sound at all from what I could tell, but you should at least have some background music.
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