So it's basically TTT but in VR. Nice!
Thumbnail: Not very catchy. I'd like to see some exciting text, maybe a character or something key to the video brought to the foreground and outlined. A good option might be when your friend's character was glitching out.
Intro: there was none. Try to come up with some sort of branded intro for your stuff. It's very important to have a brand.
Outro: There also wasn't an outro, this is where you usually would conclude the video and ask your viewers to like and subscribe.
Content: I love TTT videos, so this was pretty fun for me. I think you chose some really good moments and you kept the video nice and short. I would like if you turned up the voice chat a little more so we can more easily understand what they were saying, but overall a solid video.
End Screen: You have one so that's good. And you have a message asking to like and subscribe, so good there too!
The start of the vid really got me lmao wasn't expecting that. I might have the give the game a try. I really like the chemistry you guys have! Nothing seems forced
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