I have to agree with the other review. It's not very unique to just cut up some footage from a show. But you do put a bit of a spin on it with the PetSmart thing. However, I'd expect that you get copyright claims all over stuff like this.
Ok a few things.
The music in the beginning is SUPER loud, then, when the subscribe comes onto screen, audio gets quiet then instantly ramps back up. I listen with my headphones at 80% and youtube turned all the way up. I check my videos and make sure they follow the layout in this reddit post. https://www.reddit.com/r/SmallYTChannel/comments/hzwm09/how_you_can_increase_your_audience_retention_fix/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3
There are several questions you should ask yourself when checking the sound in your videos.
Is the video lacking organization with the volume? Is it too loud, soft or raspy?
If Yes, it would probably be in your best interest to re-render your video after turning down the sound. The levels you would want to stay around are below; Though you can fiddle around with them as you so wish.
Dialogue: -6db to -15db | (average ranges from -8db to -12db).
Overall Level: -12db to -20db.
Music: -18db to -22db.
Sound Effects: -14db to -20db.
If the answer is NO, then you should be fine for the time being and skip this one.
Otherwise the editing itself was pretty great and I enjoyed the video itself. Keep it up
I watched this and didn't understand what did you edit to this ad. You need to provide more information to the meta (title and description). Maybe add the original ad also so the viewer could see the difference.
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