The music is good and so is the text with it. However a few notes.
1. It is more of a teaser than most teasers since there's almost no actual footage from the episode. It's mainly just a credits.
2. You called your 3rd actor Mr. . I'm sure this is how you may know him, but we the audience do not, so you should probably just use his name without the "Mr" title.
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