To help with the frame rate/render distance i would suggest you download Optifine for your Minecraft. It helps smooth everything out and helped me alot. Overall I got old DanTDM vibes from all the exploring and stuff. If you could start a world with friends or with mods I think it would get a lot more attention!

Hey there, so this video could have been good. You have a good personality however you damned the video from the start. Talking about how the video is going to be crap and focusing on how bad things are at the start puts people off watching. Also it could have been cut down more because there's alot of long pauses where you don't speak

I encourage you to try to get friends to join along

I agree with people that you could get rid of the disclaimer at the beginning. It does nothing good for you. If you do want to talk about how bad your footage is, it is better to sarcastically suggest that it's amazing. I think if you took a little more time, you could have probably found some less interesting parts to get rid of. However the length of this video is still ok. You do a pretty good job of talking throughout and you even sign off pretty well, so that's good. I would consider picking one niche though instead of spreading yourself out among so many genres. It's better for your subscribers that way, so they'll know that you consitantly put out content that they're interested in.

Maybe like the others said do not put that disclaimer In front of the video, since that dooms it. You can try to crack a joke about your quality, not outright bash it