This game looks really cool and funny. The video was good and there were funny moments. I didn't hear many jokes from you and your friends which made it mostly laughing at the game. Keep up the good work
Download a Star Wars map and have a bunch of stormtroopers aim really badly for a bit. Like a firing squad thing?
First off, the like and subscribe at the top of the vid is a nice format with a few tweeks.
1. You've given us nothing to like and/or subscribe for yet. Consider putting a clip just before it.
2. The majority of people on the internet don't know you so they have no interest in just "helping you out". Instead tell them what they're gonna get by subscribing. "More VR videos" or "More funny moments".
As for the rest of the video, there wasn't anything really wrong with it. Not the funniest moments I've seen from you, but still not bad.
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