I feel like you need more gameplay of tasks and running around
Overall, not horrible but not great. It needed more variety in the clips other than voting and people being ejected
Those audio transitions were something I was paying attention to. Try to adjust the audio by normalizing it and then removing background noise or see if you can get a better mic. The intro was good and in the right place. I don't know how many of you there are, but the dialogue was quite chaotic, maybe add some subtitles who is saying, and what? quite a good video overlay effects, but you could add more of them. I would say that the VR gameplay of yours is more entertaining than this. I just get a headache watching this (mostly because of the dialogue and audio).
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