the video started a little abruptly so I didn't really know what was going on (probably because I haven't played TF2 before) so I would suggest maybe doing a little introduction into what you're doing first before the game play starts.
Your audio was a little lower than the game audio so I was hearing a lot of the clanking from the weapons and the dude in game screaming over you guys talking.
The audio seemed a little scrambled too because there were alot of cuts in between stuff. It was a little hard to keep track of what was going on (but this might be again because I don't play TF2.
I think these videos can definitely go places if you get things a little more organized, keep up the good work!
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