Way to update your followers. You have a really good voice for this. One thing I would say is that you could have used a little more structure to this video. If you can separate out your web cam and game footage that will make it easier. But I would have a notepad with your talking points ready and maybe even run them a couple times before recording. Also you may have been able to make the video a little more exciting by numerating your talking points on the screen with text as you went over them. Way to keep your following informed so they don't get lost in the transition tho.

Not a big fan of Minecraft but I will look more the actual content than the game! Your facecam is okay, I can see clearly your face and it's not darkbor over bright. Instead of just standing in the beginning why not do something while speaking? It would add more interest towards the video. Damn the forest sounds good, have played it, but it freaks me out if played solo. This type of video maybe not the best choice to upload here because it's channel update and it's for your subscribers, person like me who really don't know you won't get much value of channels update video. The audio was also great by the way. Keep making videos and good luck!

As someone who likes Minecraft i like how your voice is really calming for the game like this. Your voice is coming through really clearly and i feel you on the motivation aspect, i just started getting back into making content again

Dayum this looks great. Hoping to get my gaming set as well to improve my video and MC gaming quality. If you're interested in doing a collab, I'd like to do one with you. I feel like you're a great guy coz of this video!

Hey nice update video, sometimes you talk quite slow, I think if it was more fast paced it would be better. Parts that could be cut out. Maybe adding some background music and focusing on the exciting things you have planned

your voice is nice and clear so really good,also great that you update and tell ppl waht is going on,is that you final thumbnail i would just say make that more alluring. otherwise great job

Congrats on the upgrade. The quality of the video is really good I’m both visual and audio aspects. I have little critique on this video, the only thing I would say is to edit out the pauses such as the ‘umms’ and ‘has’ but seeing as though this is a casual channel update that doesn’t really matter. I look forward to seeing future content!

Kudos on the face cam. I think it helps. I realize that this is just a channel update vid, but I think your videos would benefit a ton more if you put a little more energy into your commentary. Your topics are good. It's starting to dawn on me, for myself as well, that if you appear to be enjoying the game, your viewers will enjoy it, too. Good luck