This video is better than the other because we actually get game and comms audio. However, the music is still too mellow and still too center stage, and the game/comms are too quiet. I'd say leave the music volume where it's at, but bring up the game and comms so that they are more prominant. Also, you should work on a reusable intro and and end screen where you can ask for likes and subscribes. It's an important step for growth.

great vid! i always like music in gaming comps but i suggest a more upbeat or intense song, might i suggest checking out: Yooh, Creo, Lapix, LeaF, Xtrullor, Hinkik, Camellia and Ghost Data

What's the song called? I might use it as intro music, other than that great video although you might want to turn the music down a bit.

I liked you jumped straight to the action. The music was chill and there was a nice flow with gameplay and the music. Here are some issues: here are some things you could improve: I recommended to make some call of action thing on the video to gain something out of it. I would want to make an appealing thumbnail to the video to gain some views. If you make the gaming footage match with the rhythm of the music, this video would have been awesome, now it was okay, but nothing really special in it.