Just a video where I drink the most vile beverage on the planet
Total rating= 17
This is amazing video I just subbed the edits honestly made me laugh out loud. there is no critique I could give to this video that I think could make it better!
I think the performance was good but you could make it even better by going it through a couple of times, so it would come more naturally. Now there were tiny tiny gaps where you were thinking what to say next. At least to me, it looked like that. I think cuts were really good and the overall setup of the video was well planned! You did better than most of the small YouTubers in your niche and you were entertaining as well.
This video was a bit random in my opinion, you're introduction was very long and you seemed nervous. Some of the jokes needed improvement too. Overall it was a good video however I think shorten it down and try to get used to recording yourself and being natural
For the most part I think you maybe need to get used to being in front of a camera and working on less pauses, kinda the same thing as some other people are saying
So my main critique is that somehow it seemed like your lips were out of sync with your audio, especially at the beginning. It might be mainly due to the fact that you don't move your mouth much when you speak. Try practicing mouthing words in a mirror and really exagerate your mouth movement when you do it. That should help a bit.
Felt some things were forced into the video and didn't deliver as well as you probably expected. Maybe you need to practise a bit more and improve your on-camera stature so you can avoid potential awkward pauses or jokes.
This start feels kind of slow paced. Talking faster would help during filming or maybe afterwards you can edit in some flashing text every once in a while or random zoom ins just to engage the viewer.
Maybe add text over each drink as you say them
Here would be a good time to add text on the screen with different variations of misspellings as you mispronounce the sauce.
good time to zoom in as you say "super... mega... ultra drink"
The zoom in there was great!
"I won't be ok if I drink more of this" *drinks more of it
This part is getting a little repetitive.
So I think you got the basics down (there were a lot of interesting moments where you showed your personality and you did have some editing with zoom ins or cuts), but it's still pretty repetitive and slow at times. You're going to need to add a lot more editing for stuff like this so that it's faster paced. Keeping an audience member's attention is the most important thing here. I commented two quotes which I thought were interesting.
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