WHAT IS THAT?? | Minecraft: With Mods
Jrink This took longer cuz i felt like making this one extra special. Feedback is appreciated! Check out the twitch: https://www.twitch.tv/icedpp Follow me on twitter where i don't post: https://twitter.com/IcedPp Add me on Discord: Jrink#6448 |
- Total rating= 14
8 Reviews
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The thumbnail on this video is ok. You could maybe have made the "Modded Fun" text a little larger to emphasize it more. The flashback was a little too long. The stop in the middle to ask for like and subscribe was cute, but all ran a little long. The rest of the video was really good. I liked the style of subtitles that you had here, though I would suggest the pop in to be a little faster so the text has more time on the screen before it pops away. I would also bring them all in closer to center bottom, cause it's really hard to have your attention keep darting all around the screen. Overall really funny tho. |
G |
Editing is phenomenal! The use of captions, memes and other stuff is really good! But sometimes the captions feel a bit small. |
A |
I agree with the other reviewer - the thumbnail is a bit lackluster. If possible, I would try to use shaders or something to spice up the thumbnail and make it stand out from the generic thumbnail. The flashback could have been a bit shorter, but overall it added enough to the video to where I wasn't bothered by it. Your use of captions is amazing, and I can imagine those took FOREVER to edit in. The music/sound effects were utilized very well, too. However, I would have shortened (or maybe even completely scrapped) the subscribe scene in the middle. I feel like if your content is high quality, it will make people want to do it without you having to ramble. Overall, 4/5 from me... A few things could be touched up, but you did a good job in the end. |
Z |
Based on other peoples reviews about your thumbnail, i recomend just finding the most cursed frame in the video and put a but of shading or outer glow than boom! Easy thumbnail |
m |
keep it up |
A |
very nice |
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