In the Indie Horror PS4 Gameplay, Infliction Extended Cut, walkthrough part 5, we discover that something truly sinister is going on....
"I found her journal. Was I abusing her? Did I really do those things to her? No! NO! It can't have been me! There must have been someone else doing those things! I can't escape! Something did this to us, and now, I'm stuck here, too! I have to figure out what happened. I will not accept this narrative! THERE'S NO WAY I DID THESE THINGS!"
Good thumbnail. Nice job putting the safety warning at the beginning, not a lot of creators would think to do that. I do like that you've created a persona around your gaming channel, but I bet that it's a real pain to have to do that makeup before every recording. As far as content goes, you talk pretty constantly, which is good. You're not rambling, everything you say has meaning and you speak clearly. It might be nice to get a bit more energy from you, I mean you could have freaked out a bit at the end when she grabbed you. So the content was ok, could have been better, but not bad. I do like your end screen, you definitly have your brand down. Good video all in all.
I like how you have branded the channel and you use face cam + green screen very interesting and entertaining way. There is tho the problem with the threshold of the green color with your hats outline, try to adjust the settings to get rid of the green color. Good audio quality and video quality. Once again I liked how you add some transformations to your face cam. Very good title of the video and the thumbnail was okay but it could have been a little bit made more interesting (add yourself into it for example). I would rather say "Please share the video if you want to scare the shit of your friend..." or something than adding the text "please share" because it sounds a little bit of begging. The content itself was maybe one of the best walkthroughs I have seen. Your fellow deserve the first 5-star rating I am giving on this site!
Appreciate the safety warning! Means so much to the younger viewers that would watch your video. Its good that your care for your viewers :D. I also like that Nebraska joke XD
Hey again, this was a really good video. To improve I'd say that the video at the start that you used to draw in the audience could have been better. The pauses where you don't speak could be cut, I understand some are needed for the story but there was a few that could be cut. Overall it was a great video keep up the good work
The thumbnail could be better. Maybe have an image of you spooked or something with the game title in the background or a character from the game with the game title in the background instead. The video is good! I would say try and do some better keying with your greenscreen but I just assumed that it was your outfit making it weird. I would suggest when reading that book is to be a little more enthusiastic. But other than that I liked it. You made moments funny despite the creepy atmosphere so well done.
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