Andrew finishes setting up the base walls while Zack and Joe go out in search of supplies. But instead they end up running and screaming like little girls from the terrors of the garden.
Total rating= 10
I like the highlight clip at the beginning. I think you guys are funny and compliment each other well.
Also, I like the text you added to the video.
I think you need to change the ratio of the game audio to the voice audio. There are points where the game over powers your voices. You want to highlight your commentary, as that's what makes you different from other channels.
Other than that, I think it's a decent video. Keep going. = )
I really like these videos! The text on screen identifying who's gameplay we are watching is extremely helpful and helps make the video appear authentic. In addition, the on screen text captions are also pretty good. Overall you all work well together and are quite funny. Keep it up!
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