Pretty good freestyle. sometimes it did field like you guys lost tempo with eachother just a little, but you were able to find it again pretty quickly. Besides, it is a freestyle, so that's likely to happen. Otherwise great.
Pretty good for a freestyle. There was one point where it felt like you two lost track of the other, but because it's a freestyle it is expected to happen. Maybe try getting a third friend who likes to sing or rap while you two are making the beat and you'll have an entire song :)
This was a pretty fun watch! You two have some serious skills given that was a freestyle. If I were to offer constructive criticism, I'd recommend that you film in landscape over portrait mode. You can also cut the last part with talking. Looking forward to your future content!
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