The game audio is a little loud. You can lower that as the voice audio is more important. You might want to try repositioning your camera so you're looking into it more. Also, ,maybe cover up the stuff behind you or have your software blur it. YOU are getting lost in all of that. You want to make sure that you're more prominent. If you aren't going to use a green screen, you can zoom in to yourself and cut out more of the sides and top. Good luck. PS, I KNEW The Pope was evil. XD

I'm not sure that the game audio being too loud was a big of an issue in this one. The other comments and feedback about your cam are pretty solid tho. I do like that you tried to introduce what was going on in this video, but I do feel like it still wasn't clear the way it was presented and you kind of just dropped off. The rest of the video was fine. It could have been cut up a bit, but that's really up to what you're going for. I do like your thumbnails. They're simple but eye catching. Might be a little hard to see what they are on smaller thumbnails. but they work really well on bigger ones.

I do think if you plan on making any more of these videos, you should turn the game audio/sound effects down just a little so its easier for the viewers to hear you talking. I do really like the energy you have and the commentary you provided, very friendly and welcoming so the viewer doesn't feel out of place at all! I'm no pro at the game by far but you really are fast with getting the tasks done lmao, it was satisfying to watch. Spon is really good at playing imposter too, I wouldn't have thought it was him