The face cam is a bit small

Do some cuts so it isn’t just all boring gameplay and gives it value on youtube

Honestly, you need to work on making your video better than others. Because without the better editing, other people will switch to other videos that will entertain them longer

That was a horrible lie

Overall, you need to work on making your videos more entertaining. Keep the viewer glued to their screen

Hey there! I would suggest that your webcam actually be front on to show your face. Right now we can only see the top of your head which doesn't show anything. Your game sounds are too loud compared to your mic volume, you should turn the game volume lower. I keep having to turn the volume down when you open doors or do tasks and then I can't hear you. Fun discussions otherwise!

So I'm going to have to agree with the other review. It's part you have your cam too high and part you are looking downward at the screen. So bring the camera down so we can see your face better. I would also say that you can afford to make the webcam 1.5 times as big as it is now. Also I'm assuming that you had the game volume so loud so that party chat would come through for your viewers because party and game sound are all mixed together. I'd suggest using the volume mixer to lower game volume and increase the party volume in the future. You talk very clearly which is nice and so do a few of your friends. You also do a good job of acting very natural, it was definitely fun to listen to you guys argue.