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I think the intro might've been too long considering new visitors won't understand the joke (I'm assuming it's an inside joke right?). Also, maybe you should take a second just to talk with your viewers before going directly into the roblox gameplay. Going directly into the roblox gameplay and hearing all those other voices was a little disorienting. Also, I'm not sure if this is just me, but honestly I couldn't really understand anything which was said. I did really like that bear animation though, so I suggest you do more of that. Just out of curiosity, how'd you get an editor? Did he just do it for exposure? |
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I think the intro might've been too long considering new visitors won't understand the joke (I'm assuming it's an inside joke right?). Also, maybe you should take a second just to talk with your viewers before going directly into the roblox gameplay. Going directly into the roblox gameplay and hearing all those other voices was a little disorienting. Also, I'm not sure if this is just me, but honestly I couldn't really understand anything which was said. I did really like that bear animation though, so I suggest you do more of that. Just out of curiosity, how'd you get an editor? Did he just do it for exposure? (Accidentally did live feedback, so I just copy and pasted everything for overall feedback). |
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I think the intro might've been too long considering new visitors won't understand the joke (I'm assuming it's an inside joke right?). Also, maybe you should take a second just to talk with your viewers before going directly into the roblox gameplay. Going directly into the roblox gameplay and hearing all those other voices was a little disorienting. Also, I'm not sure if this is just me, but honestly I couldn't really understand anything which was said. I did really like that bear animation though, so I suggest you do more of that. Just out of curiosity, how'd you get an editor? Did he just do it for exposure? Note: Accidentally did live feedback (twice), so I just copy and pasted everything for overall feedback. |
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good but you have to focus on sound |
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well done |
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